Ok... ugh...
I assume that the second round being distorted in the melody is purposeful, but your harmony doesn't match the melody, it's out-of tune.
However, the only good aspect of this song is that, unlike any other loop I've heard, this one actually flows from the ending back to the beginning, and there isn't a space at the end to throw it off.
Needs more work than needed to get the current quality, but it loops well.
Therefore, you don't need to die in a fire.
3/10, 1/5.
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Pretty good.
Not the best I've heard, but at least it's in tune.
Some poor tonedeaf bastard made a remix that was completely out of tune.
Respect, yo.
yeah i have a good ear for that ..tune stuffs. i know this song by heart on the piano though,(not very hard ) thankyou for your comment!
This is good!
Not to mention the fact that you're smart enough to mention that this isn't too much of a mix, seeing as how people are stupid enough to take 4 points off because it "isn't that different from the original"
Good job dodging a bullet!
Also, Fav.
... Oh. My. God. You pulled it off...
So far, you're the only one so far who's pulled off adding to the melody.
Most just ruin it.
I bow down to your elite skills.
This is original. I think.
Now this is a remix I can get.
A different time signature?
Cool. That's different from most.
Most just add new pieces that don't fit the style.
Changing the time signature?
That's an original idea.
You don't have to use the quotes.
Look. First time you do something, you show humility.
Also, if you can't spell, you don't have to put quotes around a purposeful mispelling.
You just can't seem to show a little humility.
Cred for picking a good song.
I give you that.
Sorry if I just come out and say mean things, I no longer believe that kindness exists in this world. Also, if you want to ask what happened, I'm never talking about that Russian narcissistic bastard ever again.
Everyone has their day
Nice remix!
Ok, so this is more of a cover.
I think.
They're pretty much 2 sides of a coin, if you ask me.
You get a ten, and ethalyn gets a swift kick in the terminology.
I never get tired of this stuff.
Took long enough, but cool none-the-less
Seriously, though?
The song is only half-there, the other half is just buildup.
Buildup is okay, but if you take 2 minutes of buildup and only had 2 minutes of song, NO!
L0L what?
First of all, even though this is your first time making music, it's still horrible.
Second, this is your FIRST TIME making music.
Beatboxing is not what you want to do the first time you make music.
I don't know what is, but I know that isn't.
Third, this could have been better, had the voice quality not been f*cked up.
And from the sound of it, you f*cked it up on purpose.
Thanks. I'll make sure to be better for my next one. Think you could tell me how to delete? Just message me.
They're right, you know.
Newgrounds needs to search for more genres.
He called it sections. However, there is a more appropriate section for this that's already available (I mean I think it's better there.): trance.
Problem with that is I have a different definition of a good trance song.
Trance? I've explained it in another review, for another song... I'll probably copy it into my account space.
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